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Ring of Bone: Lew Welch’s Posthumous Spiritual Autobiography

The Beat Century — post 30 of 100. Lew Welch, Ring of Bone (1973).

Cover of Ring of Bone by Lew Welch
Ring of Bone, 1973. Cover image via Open Library.

The poet who wrote “Raid Kills Bugs Dead” walked into the Sierra Nevada in May 1971, leaving a farewell note in his truck and taking a rifle, and was never found; his collected poems appeared two years later without him.

On 22 May 1971 Lew Welch wrote a final entry in his notebook — he had gone southwest, goodbye — took a rifle and a backpack, and walked out of a campsite in the Sierra Nevada. Gary Snyder found the notebook in Welch’s truck the following day and organised a five-day search. Nothing was ever recovered: no body, no rifle, no pack. The disappearance is total, and forty years of searching the surrounding country has not altered it.

Ring of Bone appeared in 1973 from Grey Fox Press, two years after the man. It is impossible to read innocently, since every line now arrives through the fact of the disappearance, and it is worth insisting at the outset that the book was substantially assembled before there was any reason to read it that way. The shape is the poet’s. Only the ending belongs to the mountains.

The Reed College Room

Welch’s poetic education happened in a shared house. He entered Reed College in Portland in 1948, moved in with Gary Snyder the following year, and was joined the year after that by Philip Whalen — three men in one house who would each go on to write a substantial body of work and remain in each other’s lives for the rest of their lives, which in Welch’s case was the shortest of the three.

His undergraduate thesis was on Gertrude Stein, and it was good enough to impress William Carlos Williams, with whom Welch then corresponded for years. That is an unusual apprenticeship — Stein’s ear for repetition and Williams’s insistence on American speech — and both are audible in poems that sound like a man talking rather than a man composing.

The Poet in the Ad Agency

The biographical fact that most readers cannot get past is the one Welch would probably have shrugged at. After a nervous breakdown during graduate study at the University of Chicago, he took work at an advertising agency, where he wrote the slogan “Raid Kills Bugs Dead” — three stressed syllables at the end, the redundancy doing all the work, one of the most efficient pieces of language any American poet has produced.

It is a genuinely useful detail rather than a joke at his expense. Welch’s poetics were built on compression and on the sound of a plain sentence hitting hard, and the slogan is that skill applied to insecticide. The Chicago Poem, written out of the same years, turns the same directness on the industrial city and refuses to make it beautiful.

The Title Image

The book takes its name from a poem in the Hermit Poems, published in 1965 by Donald Allen’s Four Seasons Foundation in an edition of a thousand copies reproduced directly from Welch’s handwriting. The lines are among the most quoted in postwar American poetry: he saw himself a ring of bone in the clear stream of all of it.

The image is a self seen as an aperture — not a solid thing in the water but a shape the water passes through, defined by what it lets pass. For a poet drawn to Buddhism and living for long stretches alone in a cabin, that is a precise piece of theology, and it becomes something else entirely once the man himself has passed through and gone.

The Hermit Poems also fix the physical setting the book keeps returning to. Welch spent long periods in a cabin in the northern California backcountry, and the poems from those years include a drawing for a hundred-foot circle — a hermit’s plan for a piece of ground, drawn by a man who had left an advertising career and a marriage behind him. The solitude in Welch is neither romantic nor comfortable. It reads as a treatment being administered by someone who knew he needed one.

Arranged as Autobiography

Welch described the project himself, and the description governs the book: Ring of Bone is a spiritual autobiography arranged in more or less chronological sequence. He was interested in how a mind develops in a flickering way, insights sometimes arriving years before their owner is equipped to understand them, and the chronological ordering is designed to let a reader watch that lag operate.

This matters for how the volume should be taken. It is not a posthumous scrape of the drawer. Welch had already conceived of his life’s work as one continuous document with a shape, and the 1973 Grey Fox edition — later expanded by Snyder for City Lights in 2012 with a new introduction — completes a structure its author had designed.

The machinery that got it into print was in place before the disappearance. Welch had named Donald Allen his literary executor, and Allen was the most consequential editor of the postwar avant-garde: the compiler of The New American Poetry 1945–1960, the Grove anthology that sold past a hundred thousand copies and organised the entire field into the groupings still used to teach it. Allen had left Grove for San Francisco in 1960 and set up Four Seasons Foundation and Grey Fox Press, the two imprints that carried Kerouac, Snyder, Duncan — and, after 1971, the whole of Welch. The posthumous sequence ran fast: Trip Trap and the essay How I Work as a Poet in 1973 alongside the collected poems, a Selected Poems with a Snyder preface in 1976, the two-volume correspondence I Remain in 1980. Roughly 233 pages covering 1950 to 1971, reissued by Grey Fox in 1979 and City Lights in 2012 — an unusual survival for a poet with no institutional base and no completed career.

The bibliography also contains a small unresolved discrepancy worth naming, since the sources do not agree with each other. The notebook entry is dated 22 May 1971 and Welch is generally recorded as having walked out the following day; some accounts place the departure from Snyder’s property at Nevada City rather than a campsite, and describe the weapon left behind as a revolver rather than carried as a rifle, with the note itself written some months before it was found. The abandoned truck turned up about fifteen miles north of Nevada City. None of this changes the outcome, but the variance is a reminder that the most-repeated version of a literary disappearance tends to be the most narratively satisfying one rather than the best documented.

The Man Everyone Else Wrote Down

Welch drove Kerouac to Ferlinghetti’s cabin at Big Sur and came back later to collect him, and Kerouac put him in the resulting novel as Dave Wain. Their cross-country trip with Albert Saijo produced Trip Trap, published the same year as Ring of Bone. He was stepfather to Huey Lewis, who grew up in a Marin County house where Snyder and Michael McClure came to read poetry aloud.

The manner of his description — standing on a street corner with his arms folded, trying to tell somebody what he thinks — is the whole of his style. There is no ornament in Welch, no visionary machinery, just a man being unusually clear about difficult things.

Later readers have made a case for him on grounds other than the biography. Reviewing the Grey Fox volume in Tears in the Fence, Ian Brinton set the title image beside Gerard Manley Hopkins — the sonnet in which a stone dropped in water sends ripples outward from the point of impact — and the comparison is more useful than it first appears. Hopkins gives a centre radiating outward; Welch gives a ring with the centre missing, the stream passing through where the self would be. Same geometry, opposite occupancy. It is also a sharper account of Welch’s Buddhism than the usual gesture at Zen, and it puts him in a lineage of formally exact devotional poets rather than in the loose category of Beat mysticism.

One caution about the ending is worth keeping. The notebook entry is routinely called a suicide note, and it does not actually say that: it says he went southwest and said goodbye. No body was recovered, and the ambiguity is real rather than sentimental. Treating those eight words as a confession settles a question the evidence leaves open, and it retrofits every poem in the book with an intention its author may not have had. The disappearance has swallowed the poems, which is the reverse of what he arranged. The correct response is to read the book as the autobiography he said it was, and to let the Sierra Nevada be the last page rather than the first.

I went Southwest. Goodbye. Lew Welch.

Lew Welch, final notebook entry, 22 May 1971, found by Gary Snyder

Where to go next

Go on to Philip Whalen’s On Bear’s Head and Gary Snyder’s early collections — the other two men from the Reed College house — and to Kerouac’s Big Sur, where Welch drives.


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